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Aouda
2006-09-12 . chapter 8
Hey. Entr'acte Spirte under another name.
Please update, I really liked this story and re-read in about an hour. Yo did promise that this wasn't the end... I'd love more. I know you're not reciving a hundred reviews per chapter or something but you would always know that I would be reading it the second it updated.
I'd love to see how Beck and Langley would work out. Please update...*puppy dog eyes*.
D.E. Lewis
2005-06-22 . chapter 7
Aww... the long haired freak gets his first kiss. How cute!
Aouda
2005-06-22 . chapter 7
Smart idea-showing Rebecca in her worst fear and then on a 'level' she could handle. It's also very sweet that Langley reverts to child-hood around her.
amy
2005-06-15 . chapter 6
Hello! Been following your story. I thought the plexiglass prison was original and clever. Good job with that.

I do, whoever have one question. After they escaped, did ANYONE bother to call the guys and let them know they were in fact alive and well and safe? I have this terrible vision of the guys roaming the east coast searching for their friends while Rebecca is off dancing in some club.

Amy
Entre'acte Sprite
2005-06-11 . chapter 6
Nicely done, I'm sad that I may not be able to read your next entry (I'm going on a long summer trip) but I hope you update soon, anyways.
Aouda
2005-06-07 . chapter 5
Hmm, very fun idea. You must update soon, or else I wont be able to read it ( I leave for England on the 10, but I may be able to get to a cyper cafe). Ah well. My own LG should be ready soon, but I'm toying with the idea of finsihing my Phantom story first.
Great chapter, as stated before.
Aouda
2005-06-03 . chapter 4
Joy to the world- another update. it's really funny to think how close Rebecca was to meeting the Gunmen in this chapter. Also I love the fact that she's a total card shark.
Aouda
2005-06-01 . chapter 3
Very funny chapter, I enjoyed the end very much, Rebecca seem's to be some amount of trouble. I can't wait to see her on her first operation with the guys!
Entr'acte Sprite (aka to lazy to login)
2005-05-23 . chapter 2
Okay, I love this sotry and I hope you update it soon, or start a new one with this character, because I love her. This story has great potential. Also I love when Rebecca mentions LAngley's long fingures are like pianist- do I sense a Phan? I think I do. But please update soon, because this story is the only proof that if I put up a Lone Gunmen story that people may acutally be in this section enough to read it!
Young Lady Nightcrawler
2005-05-08 . chapter 1
Woot, I'm your first reviewer! *^^*

Although I already read your story, I'm reviewing it again anyway! I like, I like lots! Jimmy looks like a smiling baboon. *snicker* You must update soon. Yesh. You must. Or else I'll come over and kidnap Langly.

-YLN
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