Man if that was getting violated i would be raped everyday. Multiple times.

Mother does not always know best!...trust me i have one

DUDE i LOVE sushi...can i switch places with gavin?

IF i tried to draw a naked girl and a naked guy on the same canvas with a fat baby i would get expelled from school and banned from my state. BUT NO when a famous guy does it its perfectly fine!

Gavin
"...reached over and…"

Daisuke

He touched my hair…

Satoshi

He touched him!

Dark

Looks like creepy bastard has some competition…

Gavin

It IS soft!"



rofl to the max :D

dude, this story is so unexpectedly funny. i've never seen a funny dn angel fic before, they're usually a bunch of angst-fests. best line so far- Satoshi- "How could Niwa consider a person who would tape themselves to him as a possible partner?" but the sad thing is. gavin reminds me so much of this kid i know. my guy is weird and random, but he more does it to get attention, and, perversely, be accepted into a group by being socially innapropriate. like, one of those conformist "non-conformists", if you get what i mean. im trying to break him of the habit. but neway, yeah, gavin is almost too random for me.

Its funny because i read this one before i read the second one but i commented on the second one first...strange. I guess thats me though. i always go out of order. ANYWAYS.
I love your writing. Its...i can't even think of a word. wonderful? Fantastic? amazing? something along those lines. Keep writing!

It's still good. I liked last chapter's title, too. lol

Hm... You proabaly meant "wretched" instead if "retched" which I think is the past tense of a synonym of 'vomit'.

Still enjoying this one... *readson*

I like the image of the guy running into a locker while in the middle of a glare-contest.

Oh, geez. That was funny. "It IS soft!"

"The Gay Gang". Wow.
And the part with Krad and Dark is amazing. They're both so insane...

Heh! This story was mucho magnifico! *applause* Hehehehe! I loved it! *giggle* Shuichi the stupid one*giggle* Sorry off topic. Well, I loved it! Congrats! *confetti pary*

Man, I swear they are worse than Yuki and Shuichi...tsk, tsk. *giggle*

I read the first chapter and I thought the ending was hilarious! LMAO!

psh! I'm suppose to be re-weritting a macbeth scene and decided to read your fic insted! (for two days!) X3

It was tre-awsome. I love it, really. Yeah, at a point with the whole Sato-kun going a bit crazy and raping Dai I didn't really like, and the vally girl term that was K-RAD gave me the creeps, but overall I just loved it! ^^

And know I'm intrested in a new pairring and wonder if there is fiction for it...the Hiwatari Satoshi and Saehara Takeshi parring!X3

Hello. I just read about half of this story in about 6 1/2 hours. I'm dead. I also listened to the same song over and over because it was the longest one I could find, coincidently it was the long version of D N Angel's opening theme. I just realised this. Getting back on track, I'd like to say that this story rocked; it was funny angsty and occasionaly made me need to skip many a section, and I'm going to read some of your other storys. Tomorow, as in 2 hours my dad'll be up (it's around 2:30 AM) and get mad At me if I;m not sleeping! YAY FOR SLEEP-DEPRIVATION!
-Fnick

Ok, I'm sorry, I realize that I've reviewed... barely any of the chapters... but I just had to keep reading! Sorry.
No, Sato-chan is MINE MINE XD I wish.
That was one of the BESTEST stories EVER! I saw that you have a second one... YES I'm so hapy!
Takeshi, STAY AWAY FROM MY SATO-CHAN! XD
Sorry.
Thank-you so much for writing such an AWESOME story!
Yay for blue popsicles, -Bowleena