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| Mizuki Yukika 2006-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseI was crying... you're such a gud writer. But I don't get it. If you're so gud at writing, why don't you just write longer stories... that story I read like 150 times and I neva got sick of it. It was so gud with so much desciption... I pictured it... it was sad... I cried... especially this part: He couldn't help but notice that she looked desperate, wild, determined but unwilling to defend herself against such an unwound opponent. Byakugan noted the words trying to spill out of her throat, but couldn't hear, could barely see... Nothing could've been more beautiful... |
| Hoppy-chan 2006-03-20 ch 1, | abuseWow. A+ for the writing style. |
| Xoni Newcomer 2005-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseA bit confusing, specially the title, but interesting and intense. A descarnate look into one of the downsides of their lifestyle. |