Wow, that is so cool, i really like this story. I can't wait to read more. I hope that you will continue to write more, and finish this story.

Man, Golumfryingeggs, you're one crazy writer to leave a story hanging at a cliff-hanger like that.

I mean I can't believe you got me hooked to a story with this as an ending. Please, tell me that this ain't the ending. I mean the part where Rath complete changed...:

" “… master…” he whispered his eyes focusing on the massive black serpent looming behind met. Its eyes burning with a red hot fire, its mouth dripping with ruby red blood. And despite himself, Rath began to laugh… " -- (this part was a bit sad because I like Rath, but cool at the same time since I've always wondered what it would be like if Rath became a bad guy, the Dark Coba, instead of the Green-Golden Guardian...or in your story's case, the Speed Demon.)

I do hope that you will return to this story soon, and complete it. I don't know what you're talking about, but this story's great. It's just probably that not many can find this story, or it could be because that this series has been off the air for a while--which I do miss. (I use to watch it all the time when I was young. **(sigh)** Good Times. My older bro and I would have a fun time enteretaining ourselves watching this series before school.) Oh well, I think I've took enough space on your reviews page with my rambling reviews.

But, seriously, I do hope that you will complete this story very soon [of-course when you're not too busy], and I'll look forward to any other story that you've written that catches my interest.

So hopefully, for now...I bid you adieu.
(^_^)Yokai Summoner (^_^)

Whoops...I made a little typo on the last ch review; I meant to type,...on to ch.9... ^_^

Anyways, this chapter had its ups and downs...and its sad and happy moments. I liked every bit of it, but it does make me a bit sad to see Rath slowly dying. **(sigh)**

I did like the scene where Heke and Ja'kal were talking about the Speed Demon:
" “S-speed demon?” Ja-kal said.

“What?” the snake barked.

“You said speed demon, as in a very fast demon.”

“Yes, obviously” she hissed, rolling her eyes. " -- quite a funny bit there, it made me smile after I read this part. ^^

So, I guess it's on to your last update, Ch. 10...(drum roll)(^_^)

Good God! This had suspense written all over this chapter. Nice Work! I also do feel a bit sad for Rath, but I do hope that when the Rat guy, Met, said that "...he killed my mother," I do hope that Rath did so accidently...I mean...it would also be his mother, too; plus, I don't think that Rath would be that cold to do something like that; it's out of his character. But, I did like the scene at the beginning:
" “With the strength of Ra!” he was met with another small blip. Rath looked up at his confused brother, he started rather embarrassed “Right … um…” and he turned and ran. "

So, Nice Job, once again, and sorry it I sound a bit repetitious, but I dohope you like my reviews.

So on to ch.8... ^_^

Man, I totally enjoyed this chapter. Ooh, it also looks like a showdown against brother VS. brother is gonna begin. Also, that scene in the beginning is freakin' hilarious:

" “Seeing as we have light we shall search the building for any clues as to who had robbed it” Ja-kal said matter of fact “Nefertina you and I will search these Chambers, Armon you and Rath will search the upper chambers, is that understood?”

“Uh….no” Armon said

“What do you mean ‘no’?”

“Because I can’t do what you ask of me” he whined.

“Why not Armon?” Nefertina butted in.

“Because Rath is not here”

“What? Why didn’t you say anything?”

“I had only noticed until now!” " - what a great scene. Armon always says the best stuff at the most interesting times. Nice Job! So, looks like I got 3 more updates left to read.So, on to ch. 8! ^^

I got to say...this new rat man character is very interesting, but I'm more interested to find out what was in that "dark filthy yellow snake skin" book. Also, nice job on another flashback, the descriptive paragrsph was very detailed. I could picture it perfectly in my mind. And, "“A fire snake?”...how cool, I wonder who it could be...
Guess I'll find out when I read on, to ch. 7

Oh a couple, I bet Rath and Nefertina would make a great couple. Also, I just love this chapter, even if it had the flashbacks of Rath's horrible past. I also can't believe that Rath was driving so recklessly that he got himself unconscience for a while. Nice Job! ^_^

On to Ch. 6...

Geez, nice surprise ending...I mean, "HIS BROTHER," and he wants to "Hurt him badly." Man, does this new guy have issues or what. Also, I knew it that Presly was going to do something foolish. Oh well, otherwise other great chapter.

On to ch. 5...^^

Aww...how sad. I didn't think that just because he was a scriber that his father would be so abusive. Oh how cruel...but I did like the ending scene with Presly...ha, he is always getting himself into trouble.

So on to the next chapter, ch. 4. I can't wait to read what happened next. ^^

Wow, great chapter! I like the parts of when you described Rath and how he's disappearing inside. By the way, nice job on your descriptive paragraphs; also, it did seem a bit sad that Ja'Kal would treat him like that. I think it does fit him abit, but I hope that their relationship doesn't stay that way. I like that before in the series, Rath and Ja'Kal always helped each other when they need it.

So, on to ch. 3...

Well, I got to say...this is a one of the best Mummies Alive FanFic on this site so far, but sadly, I see that you have not updated this story since 2007. Oh well, I still like that this story seems to be mostly revolve around Rath, who is probably the best of all the mummies. Now don't get me wrong...the other mummies were cool, but not as cool as Rath.

Well, On to ch. 2...

I love this story!

you must finish this! i'm dying to know how it ends! *runs in circles*

First of all Cool story, please update soon!!
Secondly cool pen name.

Okay...no deaths by pillow I love this! please keep continue to continue!