Great story, looking forward to the rest!

That was great!

Awesome story!
I read the first few chapters and I literally just sat here for an hour reading the whole thing . . . it's really addicting!

I seriously can't see any way to improve it, it's just to awesome!! The characters are drawn beautifully and the plot is just perfectly paced!

Can't wait for next chapter!!

I love the story. Orion is hilarious. And so toast. *exasperated huff* I can't believe he's going to try to rescue Eli all on his own. He is so gonna get it.

I can't wait until you write the next chapter!

Wow. Just... wow. This is an incredible piece of work so far. There were a few questionable wording situations, but nothing that a good, professional editing overhaul wouldn't take care of. And speaking of professionalism, you may want to seriously look into publishing this if you ever finish it -- I've read a couple of Star Wars-based works published under the LucasArts seal of approval that were extremely poorly written compared to this.

Anyway, you've done beyond an excellent job with this so far, and I can't wait for Chapter 21 and beyond!

I knew it! T'was the butler with a kitchen knife! Err, Handmaiden, I mean. >.>

Evil Cliffhanger! *is at the edge of her seat* x.x

Hey, this is really good, I enjoy it. I am curious though, is this before or after the events of KOTOR I or II? Regardless, I enjoy it a lot, keep up the good work.

Great story. I am really enjoying it.

Why have I not reviewed this before? Love your story, Eli.

Great story Eli dear!