 Kiwee 2/10/10 . chapter 1I'm crying, and I don't even know why. No, wait, I do know why, but I can't put it down in words. This Marissa just resonants with me somehow, and her attitude and beliefs and word and her aching heart struck a nerve, and that's why I'm crying. |
 Ridke 2/14/06 . chapter 1 DEFINITELY one of the best The O.C. stories here in You captured everything so smoothly, Marissa's thoughts, exceptionally, and how she comes to terms with what's really in front of her. A definite favorite out of all the fics I've ever read (and that is saying much). You rock. I'll be looking forward to all your next fics! _ |
 KneazleTheWeazle 6/16/05 . chapter 1OMG! Possibly one of the best OC stories ever! Sad for Marissa, but I really loved her thoughts, amazing characterization, I could so imagine Marissa thinking like that! |
 carpanther 5/12/05 . chapter 1Really cool. I liked it. |
 Del64 5/11/05 . chapter 1 This is exceptional. What a creative and unique pov of the whole situation-you've made me feel differently about all three characters. Thank you for your thoughtfulness, and I hope you write more!
Del64 |
 C 5/9/05 . chapter 1 Well written. I really liked this. |
 Brightest Firefly 5/9/05 . chapter 1Great job! Very touching. :-) |