don't think he can NOT regret what he did to kuronue, or pass him aside like that. bring him back, yeah?

I like the way you do it only from Kurama's point of view. This story is absolutely perfect the way it is. I think you do an especially good job with Kurama's character. I also love the longing undertone involving Kuronue. Truly wonderful. Update when you can, k?

Just to let you know, your fantastic story has been added to the 'beyond magical' C2 archive. If you have any problems with this, please contact Red Kitsune Flames, who is the manager.
Thank you!

I like this, please update.

I loved it...it was so nice...I'm usually fond of yuusuke/kurama pairing,but this one is really adorable.^^

GOSH, this is really good. I mean "WOWIE-FOO'S" good. I think the way you're writing it now, with Kurama's meticulous attention to detail and everything, is really fitting. I'm not saying that 3rd-person would hurt, it would just change the rythm of the story.

However, this excellent writing SKILLAGE does not make-up for the fact Kurama is the headmaster of the Fine Art of Whoring University, a place to further one's natural ability woth HANDS-ON RESEARCH.

You set an exquisite tone with this story. I have always been a Kuronue fan and I love how you protrayed that entire scene where he is killed.

I love your writing style, your descriptions of Yusuke and Hiei's relationships with Kurama are very well done, and the small scene with Hiei and Kurama was very in character and sultry.

"He is too picky to make the experience enjoyable" made me laugh, but - well - that's Hiei.

YAY ^_^ I love the way you described the relationships between Kurama, Hiei and Yusuke. >> Your so deep with your characterization... and stuff. I wish I could be that deep. Damn.

Kurama's narration was pretty, too.

nice, you portrayed kurama pretty well. and the whole thing, overall, is pretty nice.^^

It was beautifully written and three reviews simply does not do your writing enough credit. You beautifully described Kurama and his relationship with Kuronue. You've also captured Kurama's character very well making him very in character. I can only add one more review to this wonderful fic but I wish I could do more. (I think you can guess I enjoyed it) ^-^

The detail, description and depth that you go into that the movie and original creators couldn't even dream of making came to life right here in this fic. If you're trying to get a new style, you've found it. This is totally awe inspiring and ultimately one, not the, but one of the best fictions you have written to date. You can feel the emotion- you're heart races with Youko- you gasp and sputter and sweat as he does, feel he anxiety and loss that he feels- over Kuronue's death. Very insightful, I'll be nagging you for more!

-Much Love, Moe

0.0 Wow... This is amazing! I love it! Update it soon, please!

Fragments of a life no more. A great deed it is to put it back together, if it was never really there in the beginning...or if it is no longer there.

Life's greatest challenges...are the unforgettable challenges in the past. Hopefully this isn't just a one shot, but a story filled to the bone with a merry nonchalance...and angst. Update soon onegai.

~darksaphire