Awesome story... That was really intersting. I aplause you for such a well written story. Congrads!

its me again and again : YOU FREAK! WHAT IS WRONG W/ U ?!

One word:Damn!I was like 'What the ** just happened,what the ** just happened?' when I found out it was Shuichi.I'll never see him the same way again...

Nice!

OMG.. that was in Shuichi's point of view? That is so cool... I like ShuichixYouko better than YoukoxShuichi... I wish you'd write more of these..TT

"sorry but this is a one-shot"

Wish it wasn't. Any chance of you writing something else along similar lines?

Absolutely marvelous. I loved the unique look and such... Very creative.

Wonderful job with this!

~Lynn

now that was different. never thought Suichi would be the one in control. and in his mind, no less. that was pretty awesome! also original from what i've read. great job!

That was very good. I was hoping for a lil more, but it was very creative and true. It was very true and insiteful. I like the way you think.

Ah...it's so nice to read a story where Shuuichi-kun's the (ever so slightly obsessed) Seme...Way to go. You rock! ^_^

E! -insert total obsessed squeel- I totally loved it! Not just loved- LOVE. Oh, the noir and darkness! Better than Oppressive Darkness. Totally. And I'm glad you're feeling better, or, 'wooteriffic'! Love you tons. I wish I could give you a more constructive review, but I'm too blinded by total fangirl love to write one! You should write way late and all disillusioned more often.

-Moe