that was sad, but i knew that the ending of the ending had to be something like that. i love the way you used her song throughout this story. it's such a good song... a rare beauty in the north... i cried at the ending of this movie, it was so good. welp, keep the good work coming!

sincerely,

miss. poetic

I haven't seen the movie yet, but because I read your fanfict I know a bit of what it's about now. I've wanted to watch this movie but I just didn't know what it was about. There wasn't enough suspense in the summaries and trailors and the title to get me to run over to the theatres. But not I will.

Oh my gosh. This is a really well written fanfict. You have a unique style that is different from everyone else's. I, like quite a lot of other people, like how you put those italicized words in between. It really gives it a poetic feel. This fanfict is one of the better ones that I've seen. Bravo. Well written, well written

Butterfly

Samyo, in the movie Jin died and leo died bacause of the harsh winds. good shot though it should of really ended like that.

A fitting, and not to mention believable ending to a great film.

Superb story.

Nice one-shot, sad ending though :(

Omg that was so so good. I am in tears(as usual) This is my favorite movie, and now this is one of my favorite fics.

ah, it was inevitable, wasn't it?

Its not like they would've made up and hugged and opened a bar in Kentucky.

very beautifully written. did you write the poem between the lines?

it's good. though a bit too short but good.

How very sad...I loved this movie, and I liked the fic okay, but it went a little fast for my taste. You could've drawn it out more- made it more articulate.

bEAUTIFUL, WELL DONE, THATS SO HAUNTING X

Nicely done. I just watched this movie and decided to check out the fanfics. You wrote what I actually thought was going to happen in the movie - I thought they were going to kill each other.

Anyway, good job! Keep up the good work!

If only Leo and Wind could stop their fighting 'sigh'. This was a nice oneshot, are you oging to make a sequel or continue it?

Wow... Really nice... a lil bit too short though... Shuei Feng/Jin/Wind and Leo was portrayed perfectly... ROCK ON!

That movie was so beautiful and you've managed to bring that beauty through even with so little visual detail. I love how you have the song winding through the lines, it's so sad. I love that movie so much...*sighs*...poor, poor Zhang Ziyi...

thats how it should've happened in the movie they all should've died...that way they didn't have to live with out the other. good conversation. i liked it a lot...*sigh* my fave movie...