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skepsis66
2009-11-25 . chapter 1
Gorgeous writing. You see the life of Kakashi glimpse by glimpse. At times funny, mostly tragic, but in the end fulfilling. Obito's a fantastic character here - seeing Kakashi struggle through the years through the eye of his best friend is something special. Love it.
Uchina
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
I smiled too.
.001Kamikakushi
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
love this story.
I was not a Kakashi fan until i finally saw the gaiden animated XD
I just realized Kakasi's an incredibly interesting character with a lot of material to work on. I'm surprised there's not any reference of him being Minato's student in the serie...
Anyway, excellent one-shot. you managed to relate every important things in just one chapter. And yet it's fluid.
Payce99
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
that was so touching!
Skedaddle-San
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
This was incredible.

I really can't think of any criticism.
Liashi, FNA Sora
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
Aw, I'm tearing up that was so awesome. Total Kakashi love.
Legate Dana Scipio
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
Touching and wonderful story, I greatly enjoyed it.
Steven Kodaly
2009-07-22 . chapter 1
That's not the usual run of the mill ghost story I read...
Shunatsu
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
This fic is WONDERFUL! I loved it so much1 You portrayed the characters so perfectly and in the correct depth in all times. It was especially comforting with the knowledge that Obito still care for him in death.
al3n3a
2009-05-29 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing. =)
sunnyxshiine
2009-05-27 . chapter 1
Ah, I actually started to tear up after I read this! I think you captured Kakashi's loneliness for those years perfectly, and how he eventually found and forgave himself was completely heartwarming. I'm so glad I happened across this wonderful fic :)
Katharina
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Beautyful
A.C.Y.P.
2009-05-16 . chapter 1
Minor grammar errors, but this was lovely. ^^

...MY TEAR DUCTS YOU BAST%&^! (lol, jokes, jokes).

Kakashi has always been one of my faves, but after reading Gaiden and trying to imagine myself in the same situation (near impossible, since ninja's cease to exist now) his mentality really is questionable, huh? I think that if Obito and Rin were given more screen time, you would have captured their character pretty well. Thanks for the nice read. ^^
Ellie H
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
AHH this is amazing it made me cry!
It's so thoughtful and really made me think. PLease keep writing, this was really good.
HelKat
2009-02-17 . chapter 1
You should think about a sequel with Kakashi meeting his team after his death. This was a great story though, and I absolutely loved it, especially how it was through Obito's perspective.
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