Although we aren't ever given too much about Tomoe and her personality/interactions I think you did a great job of keepign her in character while introducing some new ideas like her thoughts about her mother. Written very well, of course. I enjoyed this one-shot. Thanks for posting!

Nice work here...

A slightly different approach to Tomoe’s character... using a third standard.

Great work on characterization... a good overall read..

Cya

Great job! I usually don't like Tomoe fics (whether one-shot or not) but this one was interesting! ]

pnaixrose

So sad, yet so beautiful. I really enjoyed it. A great job of portraing Tomoe's emotions. Once again a really good story.

Peace

I forgot who is Tomoe in Rurouni Kenshin,and if anyone is to be Kenshin's wife its Kori(is tht her name? don't remember very well so long since I watched it)

I like the way you expand and flesh out the different characters. Well, this apply to all your fics which I've read and this is again one fine example of it. Please update more especially on your RK fanfics.

I like the way you expand and flesh out the different characters. Well, this apply to all your fics which I've read and this is again one fine example of it. Please update more especially on your RK fanfics.

oh...very nice!

Man, tomoe's past is SOOOOO sad. I REALLY like Tomoe...

As always, great fic!

Me likey very much! Ergh, how come I'm practically the only reviewer in the entire section? I can't read all 157 (as I write) fics at once! And I feel so sorry for all the good writers here who get 0 reviews, whereas in the Harry Potter section even the worst fics have 3 or 4 - not always positive, but at least they get reviewed. Plus, I'm coming off as a total idiot because I haven't giving a single review for an RK fic here that isn't all positive and gushy - you can check if you want to - and I hate not being able to say anything constructive - well, no I don't because it generally means it's a very good fic, and I like very good fics, but AAAAH! Okay, sorry, that was a rant coming from temporary insanity. I'm okay now, really I am. Sorry for boring you to sleep, and once again, very nice job.