|Reviews for A Mother's Love|
| Metanoeo 4/2/09 . chapter 1
This has to be one of the sweetest and heartfelt stories in the ToS section. What a great job at portraying such a true message in this light! Good luck with other projects!
| avatar-kyuubi-warrior 12/16/08 . chapter 1
Adorable-ness! Raine's a good mommy. :)
| SheenaFox 10/5/08 . chapter 1
naw, this was awesome! but i had to pause to realize that this was after the game. and if it was after the game, i'd think that Genis and Raine would be on a journey to help half-elves be accepted. love it though!
| Kairikiani 7/27/08 . chapter 1
Aw. Just what I was looking for. Anyway, enough babbling.
I like the line "he only let, 'I'm fine, Lloyd,' slip through". It's a good metaphor. The story flowed well. The only awkward part was when Genis was thinking to himself; I thought the wording was a little odd there. Overall, I'd say good job.
| Cassil van Kosh 3/16/08 . chapter 1
hey I guess is little late but... is cute, i love genis doing a pressent for his big sis
| Alli-dunno 2/14/07 . chapter 1
I stumbled across this and this is just plain adorable!
| Baby Kat Snophlake 10/20/06 . chapter 1
Aww, I thought it was cute! I agree with everyone about the timeline thing, but other than that, I thought this story was really good! I like Raine and Genis's sibling moments. _
| Scattle 8/28/06 . chapter 1
Aw! Short and sweet. :3
| ImperialGuardian09 5/18/06 . chapter 1
What do you mean crumbling? This is cute and fluffy! You did an amazing job with a little, cute theme.
| Professor Sage 5/17/06 . chapter 1
Crumbling? You call that crumbling. I should slap you for that, I should. This is so kawaii! n-n :: heart :: So cute! and and many other words that describe uh... cuteness! Good job! heh heh Luv it! Keep up the good work, and um.. Your writing skills only crumble if you think that, think your good and it'll come though n-n :: gives cookie :: Professor Sage
| Telos 5/13/06 . chapter 1
Haha, I found this around Mother's Day a year after it was written...
That's really all there is to say.
| Celechan 4/9/06 . chapter 1
I'm happy that such a fic like this was written. ) It was wonderfully sweet and had a nice message too.
| Erin Elric 11/17/05 . chapter 1
It was cute sweet and sad all at the same time. But I loved it though.
| Kaiousei 8/27/05 . chapter 1
I'm writing a critique because you told me to, but I don't know why. This fic was adorable! It could use a sentence of embelishment here and there, but it was short, sweet, and to the point - just as you said. I don't think it needs anything! It's gorgeous and I love it.
I also want it. _ Keep an eye on your e-mail, okay?
| Hyper-Obsessed-Fangirl 8/6/05 . chapter 1