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| AGENT KUMA-CHAN 2008-01-28 ch 3,  | abuse...that is cute...(I like it!) |
| Butterfree 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseNice start =) I like how you written her thoughts in here, really does get the reader thinking about how the other characters in Naruto helped her. ~ CupidKirby |
| CorpusBones 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseYiss yiss, Hinata is good at waiting...she's had a lot of practice. |
| CorpusBones 2006-03-21 ch 3, | abuseWonderful final chapter, I must say. Why don't more people review your work, I mean really...*goes off on a rant* |
| CorpusBones 2006-03-21 ch 2, | abuseGah!Such description and detail deserves more reviews! |
| ElasticBobaTurtle 2005-06-20 ch 3, | abuseLove your writing style. It's beautiful. XD |
| toomanypickles 2005-05-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseOy, that's so sweet/cute. |
| GargoyleSama 2005-05-25 ch 3, | abuseShoujo-ai? Here? Bravo... no where near the balance with all the Shonen-ai and Yaoi, but very well done. I was thinking more of a Hinata Temari pairing, but this is getting the creative juices flowing. I enjoy the small slices of life that you put into the chapters. The chapters, while small, are well written and bring forth much feeling. |
| toomanypickles 2005-05-23 ch 2, | abuseI love the imagery. |
| understar 2005-05-22 ch 2, | abuseGreat imagery here. I can picture it in my head... Again, it sounded HinaSaku...friendship? Yuri? I don't know...and I don't really care, either ^^ Romance tends to fly right over my head! |
| SkItZoFrEaK 2005-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Short, to the point, and very Hinata. Who's the brunette dancing with Naruto and Sakura? I like the second to last paragraph best - "when she knew how to dance, she would dance." Good line. And last line - priceless. |
| toomanypickles 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWow, you are a mad writer. By which I mean... mad, in the way nerds say it. |
| understar 2005-05-08 ch 1, | abuseOoh! Ooh! A Hinata-centric ficcie! The characterization here is really good-- write more, and more, and more! P.S.-- Sounded almost like HinaSaku yuri in some parts...probably just my perverted mind, though. ::sweatdrop:: |