Their shopping spree was pretty embarassing at times but extremely sweet at others. As for the rest of their day, I definitely found it captivating. Overall, it made for a very enjoyable read that I couldn't get enough of.

To tell you the truth, I was kind of hoping you would continue with it and follow with Hiei's trip. It would be most interesting to see him avoiding demons in Makai while also dealing with hormones and morning sickness. Mukuro showing up would have been an added plus. Still, it's your call.

Thanks for taking time to write it for us, though!

GOD!

them rolls, them green eyes, them them them!

its pronounced those!

THOSE green eyes

THOSE rolls

cant take it!

you need grammar!

awesome story it's great

This one was great too. I love the way you write it makes me feel like I am there... and that lemon wasn't too bad. They are demons. I am sure they really do stuff like that, and the fact that you added that in there just makes it seem that much more real. I really love your writing style, and like I mentioned in my last review you will probably be getting more reviews from me in the next few days. The reason for this is that once I find an author I enjoy reading I will read all of their stories... and since you have a lot I will be reading a lot... which is a good thing. I hope you don't get too bored with my reviews, but I will try to keep them fairly short, but since I know how much I like a long review with lots of details I try to do the same without repeating myself. I do love the amount of detail you have in your stories they make it that much more interesting to the reader. You truly have a gift. Until next time, ja ne!

uhh...so sad...but dispite of that its so nice too XD I love it! Its so nice...This fanfic is one of the best stories I've read. Love it! XD. Make more!

So I guess this chapter answers my question...but why involve chocolate?

this is a very funny chapter. At first I couldnt imagine Hiei dancing actually I was surprised, it wasnt really Hiei to dance, but you made it like Hiei really wanted to. Nice chapter. Question can a pregant person make love? I mean he/she is already pregnant...wondering. XD

I really like this story. For some reason I dont want to go to bed yet reading this. I love it. you really did make a reseach about it, nice. I love your story. Its nice that Hiei tried to smoothen things out. love it. XD

Uhh...I feel sad for Hiei, and the same time Kurama. I think that its cute for them to argue like that, but it also looks sad. I wonder will they ever get a girl, as thier next kit? hm... nice chapter.

nice chapter, toushi is really the child of Hiei and Kurama? I can imagine its so cute.XD

You must have updated your work, the last time I read it was the part they were in the car, Kurama was buying there linches. ITS SUCH A CUTE STORY. I love it. Well I have to read the parts that oyu added. I love it, its cute. XD.

GREAT STORY!

Aww this is so sad/cute!

Awesome!

that was awsomw please update soon