Currently working my way thru this story.

How long has it been between chapter 8 and the birth of the twins, because I find it highly unlikely that sexual stimulation is good for her or even possible so soon after what her body has gone thru.

I am really enjoying your story, very exciting.

aww i really liiked this whole story that you had going on. i thought that it was so cute, i just loved it.

So sorry that I didn't find this story sooner. I absolutely loved it. Great job!

Max gave birth less than what a day or so, and her arm is the thing that is worrying her?!?! woah.

I feel like there's alot of holes in the story, it flows and is well thought out, but it seems like the reactions of the characters - their thoughts and emotions are missing... or maybe the right word is lacking, like when Alec found out the baby was his? Where's the deep emoitonal revealation, that these were HIS and MAX'S kids? I'm not trying to down your story. I like it.

It's interesting adding some flava to a story-line that I've seen around, lol - have the read the other chapters now.

i'm really interested to find out exactly what happened and what's happening next...that last sentence was like a blow. great job on the first chapter, i'm going to keep reading now.

love it

awesomeness and suchness of it all batman...this is freakin great.

i am so in love with this story...it's massive greatness

total kick ** i love it

Ah lovely story! You've thrown in action and romance and angst and just about every genre I can think of.. And its suggestible to myself in the future not to read eighty odd thousand words at once. I really enjoyed that, thanks. Hope to see you writing more DA in the future.

x Hannah

I'll get the negative out the way first - were Biggs and CeCe necessary? They died at the end of season 2 and there was no real explanation as to why they were there in this fanfic. Their roles could have been taken by any other X5.

Postive - loved it. Nice balance of action, danger and romance. I always liked the idea of Max and Alec pairing but it was nice to see that Logan remained her friend and did not become psychotically jealous and hateful.

I think you are a true romantic.

excellent story, sad it has finished, but would recommend to others to read.

Well done, no comments to leave except how good this is.