Loved the story! Montreal? I was just there for vacation =)) but now I'm in Quebec. Canada is very nice, isn't it? Ah! But yes, loved the story!

I just had to logout and review again. ^_^

My favorite parts: "Steaming in an increasingly reproachful manner" and "to your dismay you're starting to feel peckish."

WOW greate story! Akira's fear for his stomach made me feel a little sick myself! hahaha You actualy made me feel noishiouse when he ate the ramen! That was good mind-tricking on the readers! :)
I like that you made the lunch to their battle-field as well - greate original idea!
I like this story! Keep on the good work!

Tis very lovely! ^__^ Your choice of words made me grin too (dragoon..) and you even made me learn some new words. Thanks for sharing!

I really like this. Great job. Pretty funny too.

This is lovely.

whoot, I love ur story. Hehe, RAMEN! Hi I'm Ramen XD update soon!

- RAMEN :)

veye nice

Aw, very sweet! ^_^ Both Hikaru and Akira were very much in character, too. Kudos! Write more!

I like it quite a lot. I can just imagine the two of them like that (the no-written part of the manga =P)
Kisses,K.

SO good.

i was in the middle of a growing headache and mounting frustration because i don'tknowhowtowriteapersonalstatement!! --grr-- and suddenly i was distracted by this wonderful fic.

first of all, can i say that manga vol.17 is my favorite of all?? i totally and absolutely love their match, but my fav part is when he wakes up from his dream because it always makes me sigh and feel sad but happy, which is exactly what i imagine Hikaru to feel.

and next, i want to commend you on how in character both Hikaru and Touya are: Hikaru, overbearing as usual; and Touya, who for some reason always just sorta gives in to Hikaru. ^^ lovely. i liked the POV as well--how often can you ever come across the statement 'You hallucinated it.' and not find it weird?

all in all, it's just SO good. you manage to convey what you want to convey so well, the subtle way their relationship has changed, and everything else as well. just, so good.

now, back to my personal hell... oops, i meant statement. grr.

oh yeah: have a nice day, and write more HikaAki. =)