 HotaruKenobi 2006-09-14 . chapter 11Nani!? No more?! Update update! Its getting too good! I want to know what happens next! Update please! |
 Shari 2006-05-11 . chapter 11 Yay at last we have some answers! Although I would never have suspected this... I loved the bit with the stairs *grins* This is a wonderfully thought out ficcie and I can't wait to read more. I wouldn't worry about too many characters and plotlines too much. It's good to have loads of ideas, ne? There's only one thing I want to know now: When are Zoisite and Minako gonna get together? As always, great work Laura-chan and please don't keep me waiting too long for the next chapter *huggles* |
 Senshi of Ruin 2005-10-03 . chapter 9Yeah, everyone's got lotsa explaining to do and I'm looking forward to that ^^ I think I can forgive you for not including Zoi-chan more... this time ^^ Chikai's not in league with these villains, is she? *looks nervous* Can't wait to read more soon.
~Shari |
 Senshi of Ruin 2005-08-29 . chapter 8I knew taking the short cut was a bad idea, especially through *that* park. Vallum-san... hm... this is a very interesting turn of events. Zoisite's gonna save Chikai right? How could you leave it there? *gets nervous* I hope to read more soon.
~Shari
PS: Please don't rush things on my account - I'll just have to learn to wait ^^;; |
 Senshi of Ruin 2005-08-05 . chapter 7Poor Niveus *chuckes* - I love how you've managed to make these new villains comical somewhat (it makes them so much more believeable). But how is Niveus, Zoisite's opposite? *blinks* Again, this chapter is really in character, especially the Minako/Rei rivalry and Usagi's dumb innocence and, occasional, insightfulness into the situations at hand. The scene on the balcony was very kawaii - the awkwardness between Minako and Zoi is understandable (Minako's 'punishment theory' sounds familar *grins*) and very beautifully written to stay in character and not become too fluffy. But now that Mamoru's awake he can tell Zoi to stop being such a baka and get with Minako, right? Just kidding, ^^ keep up the great work - though I'm not sure if I can wait until 17 August for more! |
 Kirara 2005-08-03 . chapter 4 Maha
Yes, seems I *can* leave spa- er, reviews, yessh..
On chapter 3 *hopes she is clicking right stuff here*
Sofar, Excellent =] Your constant twittering about PGSM etc has actually paid off 0.o I understand!!
Chikai is great ^-^ I love the detail you put in her character. You have put suspense in it, which makes me wanna read more (Like who in the heck is Nami-kun?!) Imagery is excellent, I get a mood and an emotion from your descriptions of environment, and the way you describe their actions and movements is so delicate. I can see it like a movie xD
-is a spazz-
Back hurts so ishall be continuing tomorrow/in 5 mins after I make a drink ^0^ (no promises ;])
Chu~
Kir x |
 Juli 2005-07-31 . chapter 7 interesting and well-crafted story. i'm looking forward to reading the continuing chapters. =) |
 Penanna 2005-07-24 . chapter 6Reply for DemonicBallerina =3
Long time no talk again! I swear...we need to set 'play dates' or something, I really miss hanging out with crazy you!
Don't worry about taking your time - It's not even finished yet, and I only seem to have one faithful reader at the moment in Senshi of Ruin ^^
You know, I came across those chapters to Mystic Moon too..*laughs* So embarrassing! I really should start re-writing that... My writing has improved - Year 11 is a godsend I suppose, my writing jumed so many loopholes then! I noticed you've been busy too...Yikes! *pats* Such dedication |
 DemonicBallerina 2005-07-24 . chapter 6Hola Chica!
It's Elaine! I meant to read this ages ago, after you mentioned it to me that time, but I've only just got round to it.
Anyway, wowzers, your writing has improved so much. Not so long ago I found a copy of the first few chapters of Mystic Moon that you gave me and as good as that is it's cool to read this and see how much better the writing is in it. This is fantastic. Any chance you could help me with one of my fics, I'm having problems with it. It's really annoying, I'm writing loads of fics, yet that's the only one I'm having problems with writing-wise. Anyway, I'll email you about that later.
I'll get back on topic now. Like I said, this is great, but i can't say i'm following it very well. Think you could send me some background info? You don't have to, like, if you're busy or something. But it would help a lot with the whole following the plot thing.
Um, I think that's all... oh, wait! You read Heart of Darkness and actually managed to retain what it said? I really can't get my head around that.
Right, that's all. I'll email you later.
love ya!
Elaine |
 Senshi of Ruin 2005-07-11 . chapter 6That wasn't awful, it was brilliant! I love the fight scenes (go, Mitsu-chan! lol) and I totally love the new enemies, but what do they want? Does Chikai's vision mean that Kunzite-sama's going to be reborn next? Are Rei's feelings concerning Chikai correct? So many questions... *sweatdrops* Zoi, Venus and Chikai love triangle! I didn't see that one coming - as much as I love Chikai, I demand that Zoi and Venus get together ^^
Hope to read more soon!
~Shari |
 Princess Aphrodite-goddess 2005-07-08 . chapter 5Hey great story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Chapter 6. You're a good writer. A wonderful story. Please check out my stories.
1) Secret Identities
2) A Love So Strong
3) I'm In Love With You.
Thanks.
Diana (Venus love-55) |
 Senshi of Ruin 2005-07-03 . chapter 5No! How could you leave it there! *bites nails* You have me well and truly hooked now. The beautiful poetry, the bitter-sweet recollection of Zoisite and Venus in the past life, Chikai chasing Zoisite with hair gel and now the mysterious new enemy! The perfect mix of humour, sadness, action, drama, love and a truly believable plotline that will keep us all hanging on to each and every word. And for some reason I have a strange craving for some Naahn bread now ^-^
As always, don't keep me waiting too long for the next chapter.
~Shari |
 Senshi of Ruin 2005-06-14 . chapter 4At last! Some answers! Don't worry about the size of the chappie - it was great. I'm so glad that Zoi was finally reunited with the piano - now all we need is a Zoi/Minako reunion and I'll be content ^-^ I have a few ideas about Chikai and Endymion's aura being the same, but I'm probably way off.
Can't wait for chapter four!
~Shari |
 Penanna 2005-06-13 . chapter 3@DaeDream
There will be Zoicite and Minako interaction in Chapter 4...sort of hehe ^^;; But everyone thinks that those two are going to be a couple in this fic! Hmm...Perhaps..I've not decided yet xD
Thanks for reviewing!
P.S. I loves my Zoi-kun too =3 |
 DayDreamingBlonde 2005-06-13 . chapter 3T_T Poor Zoi-kun...
This is incredibly well-written! There will be more Zoicite/Minako interaction soon... right?
I cannot wait for more. I loves my Zoi-kun so much... |