  Daeth101- Fox version 2008-09-21 . chapter 5Awesome job! I loved it!
-D101 |
| Daeth101- Fox version 2008-09-21 . chapter 4 Go Odd! Shame his good work was undone. Awesome job!
-D101 |
| Daeth101- Fox version 2008-09-21 . chapter 3 AS long as Aelita doesn't ask I think all will be fine. Awesome job!
-D101 |
| Daeth101- Fox version 2008-09-21 . chapter 2 Anna is an Evil Fan girl! Haha. Awesome job!
-D101 |
| Daeth101- Fox version 2008-09-21 . chapter 1 Oh snap! That evil witch. I'm surprised you didn't make it Sissy... then again Sissy can be nice... Awesome job!
-D101 |
| majinbuttercup 2008-07-28 . chapter 5 Not bad... There were some grammar and spelling errors and a few mistakes with your sentences that made it confusing in a few points, but, I figured out what you meant. I do have this to say though... do you realize what you've done to those poor horses? How much you put them through? Going two hundred miles in two days? Some of them in one day? They'd have to go through like twelve horses or so because the horses would be dropping dead from exhaustion. I did like that Odd was an archer though. With a little work, you could really have a good story here.
Nice work. |
| almostinsane 2008-05-24 . chapter 5 Great story! I really loved this. Thanks so much for writing this! God bless! |
| ligerzero 2008-01-29 . chapter 5 Sniff, I loved it. Can you make a sequel? About the children of Jeremie and Aelita, and Zane and Ann's revenge! Just a thought. Really, this was a great story. It held my attention the whole time, and liet me tell you, that is very difficult! By the way, this is an error on the four chapter, i believe you put to instead of too. Again, great story. we need more of this. |
| SuperKatyDid 2008-01-29 . chapter 5 loved it |
| Emperor XANA 2008-01-05 . chapter 5 You Ripped Off SpaceBalls
But it was A good Story
I saulte you and Your Story Making Skills |
| Aechigo 2007-11-14 . chapter 5 Wow. That was unexpected. Unexpected, but loved! SQUEE!! I love it!! It's wonderful!! Upon the best. Yet, I'm so sad to see it end... *sobs*
Fantastic job!
~Write On!!~
~~Aechigo~~ |
| the lazy renayumi 2007-11-10 . chapter 5 aw, Perfection! great ending. Terrific job as always. I'm so glad to see this story with a happy ending. fantastic work.
Rena |
| Handmaiden of Artemis 2007-11-10 . chapter 5 Yay! Apparently my begging and pleading paid off! Thanks so much for an adorable story :D |
| Grave Bells 2007-11-09 . chapter 5 Aw, that's so sweet!! ^^
This story was truely amazing |
| JeremyxAelita Addict 2007-11-09 . chapter 5 Thanks for updating!
Wonderful new and final chapter. I really liked it alot...Continue the great work in all your stories! |
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