Oh my gosh! That was so sweet. Seriously. Now I'm all warm and fuzzy inside. Their characterizations are so perfect! I LOVE how you ended it, this fic is wonderful. hahahaha now I have that really cheesy romantic song stuck in my head. "you are my sunshine, my only sunshiine" Beautiful oneshot!

this equals LOVE! I really appreciate the fact that this wasn't a "I was annoyed until I looked into his eyes" kind of story. That's so overdone. You wrote these guys really well.

good job, i liked it

Sitting in the sunlight like that is my favorite thing to do. On days when it's not quite cold, but just cool enough.

This was wonderfully well written and just plain fun to read. I love Sora's bubbliness here. You portrayed that well. :D

Kirah: Oh, oh, this reminds me of that guy on the train!
Ruth: Oh God, this again.
Kirah: Shut up, just cause you're overprotective-
Ruth: I'm your older sister, it's my job.
Kirah: *Facepalm* /Five minutes/, Ruth. We've been through this. You're not older in any way that counts, unless something /really/ significant happened during those first five minutes of your life that you're not telling me about.
Ruth: *Sulks*
Kirah: ANYWAYS. So I was on the light rail, and across the train there was this guy. He'd kinda been watching me since I got on the train, and I watched back, and it was one of those 'sparks-flying-across-the-room' kind of things.
Ruth: Did she mention that he looked like he was in /college/? He did.
Kirah: /Shut up/, Ruth. Anyways, so we come to our stop, which happened to be his, too, except he had a bike (oh, irony!) hung up on the wall that he needed to get down, so I held the door to keep the train from driving off while he fought with it.
Ruth: And I try to figure out what the heck is wrong with her, because she's looking a bit like a love-struck puppy at this point.
Kirah: Ignore my sister. Anyways, so this guy finally gets his bike to cooperate and on the way out of the train, and on his way by he gives me this giant smile and leans over and kisses me. Just like that. Freaked the hell out of me, actually.
Ruth: And I would have throttled him except I was frozen in horrified confusion. Did I mention this guy looked about five years older then us?
Kirah: So, yes, he just kissed me, and smiled, and said thank you, and walked away. I didn't even find out his name, which was a shame.
Ruth: A shame because I couldn't track him down and castrate him for molesting my little sister in the middle of a train station.
Kirah: ... Anyways, that's my little real-life story thing relating to this. Just letting you know that, with the bike and the spontaneous kissing and all, it was very similar. Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to beat my sister with a blunt object.

i like the part where sora was speechless, finally riku could get him to shut up, ha ha.

anyway, i like your style too, the way you wrote gave the feeling of a children story book, nice.

^^ I love sitting quietly in the sun. (Many people probably wouldn't believe that; since I'm so talkative.)

brilliant last line. nice characterization as well for both riku and sora. i love how there are no names mentioned throughout this entire fic. nicely done.

fwe! so AWESOME! GOOD JOB my friend!

hehe was a tad confused at first until i realised it was from Riku's POV, then i got into the story and liked it =D it was cute, keep writing these ^.^

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cuteness

so... cute. XD I LOVE IT. In the beginning there was something a bit off about it... but the last part of the story was so sweet that I totally forgot. ^^ Thanks for the fluff! It was a very nice read.

-H.

Oh, this was beautiful! I love the way you ended it. It was lovely and insightful... in a poetic kind of way. ^_^ It made me smile.

Cute!!

Kawaii...