Oh! Do we get to see Ran as a big, tough, ice-cold twenty-some old man next chapter? I certainly hope so, it's hard to imagine him as a kid.
And no RanKen! Please! That pairing is so overdone it's lost all meaning! Q_Q
So, anyhting he touches turns to ice, huh? Well gee, that must suck.
Update soon!

Fantastic! i lovev the idea of this, it had me thinking of the movie The Village, but i love what has happened so far, you make it seem almost real! please continue and update soon!

oh. The intrigue..
Seriously though, it has potential and thus far I have enjoyed it. Plus, it's set in Ancient China... Enough from the ancient history freak.
Keep it up!

Whoa... that was really scary >_<
I like your little switch of Aya being an "older sister" instead, that was refreshing~! I look forward to this ancient Chinese AU as well *grins* Really nice beginning with this dramatic scene with Ran! Do come with ch.2 soon, k? Be looking forward to it~ Lovely writing style~

Interesting story! Oh and I think that Aya makes a great older sister ^_^ Please write more soon!

_bugged eyed_ Great first chapter!! Well-written (as expected from an awesome writer) for a first time with AU/Fantasy/others that you plan to add! Aya-chan as neechan?? xD Hehe, didn't expect that or that she's blind with super-sensitive senses and a strange ability that I can't seem to name! And Ran, the power of Ice! I wonder where that came from? _smile smile_ Whe, wonder when Kenken shows up??

O.o huuy, that's shows how much you're into this idea that you've created, being inspired by Chinese movies! Ahaha, me too! Nope, am no annoyed with your notes but shows your determination in it!

How long of a wait for HANABI? (tries not to die for the sake of it)

Till then! Tat ta!

Oo la la la, new story with a short conversation between Kenken and Ran as prologue! Hmm, this is probably the first I ever read to have started off this way! xDD Noo, no idea is dumb unless others agree upon it..._sweat drop_