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| ProphetWithAGun 2007-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseIt's a good start but lacks proper context. And spell checking would have made it a helluva lot better. |
| Nathaniel T Bouyer Jr. 2006-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat is a great start. Now I am begging for more |
| A reader 2006-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hope this is not a one shot cause I would love to see it continued. At least one more chapter for the dinner... |
| AsianAnimeGoddess 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuseMajorly cute! Totally luv it!! You have to update way soon! LOL I found it hilarious how Ranma just killed them all in a blink of an eye! Like how it started and cant wait till future fluff between Ranma and Nabiki! W00t for them! *skips away* |
| ss4-link 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseOwch that must of hurt. Great chapter I can't wait to see more. |
| Queenmunchkin 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuseCould you maybe explain the history for this one in bed later. Love your crazy cyber stalker |
| ranryu26 2005-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abusea very good storie in a long lin of very good stories keep it up |
| Typhonis 1 2005-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo what is Ranma in this Cyberpunk future a Solo or a Nomad? |
| HappyPig 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abuse*whistles* looks like we have another great one in the make...really looking forward to more and i do hope there will be more and not a fic made just to tease me like Man of Honour :) |
| pspinler 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWell done. I very much enjoyed the character interactions,they were nicely full of depth. Lots of back story hinted at which I hope you'll reveal. Neat bit of action to end the chapter with. Very competent writing. All in all, and excellent lead in. I look forward to reading whatever else you should choose to write. Thanks! -- Pat |
| DragonGolem 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI hope that this isn't it. Say it ain't so! It was god! Keep up the good work. My only complaint just may be that you should spell check and proofread more. |
| Oberron 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseYou have definately gotten an interest. The backstories alone should be worth the telling. Well done. |
| Innortal 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI've got to admit, you've come up with some of the most original plot lines I've ever seen. I loved this chapter, and I can't wait to see where it leads to. Keep it up. Innortal |
| Wonderbee31 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was a hell of a start here, and if this is an indication, I really would love to see where else this story goes from her, and what happens to everyone in it. |