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| spacedout86 2005-12-27 ch 1,  | abuseAw, that is so cute! yay for fluffiness! :D |
| Missy Jade 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was really beautiful. I'd love to see more like this from you. |
| Starfang 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was beautiful. short and sweet. my only suggestion would be, in the beginning of the poem, where it says "he is cold" and "he is brought up with colness" maybe change one of those words, because 'cold is used twice and (maybe its just me) it seems kinda weird. but other than that most likely pointless little suggestion, this was really, really good. |
| Lissy 2005-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was cute! |
| Fichtel 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abusehm *sigh* that has been nice |
| 'Mione n Sevvie 2005-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw thats sweet |
| Droxy 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet |
| jamesismysweetheart 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abusesweet, im not a huge fan of Hg/SS i think its a bit strange but that was well written |
| Cow as White as Milk 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseAw! How sweet! |
| ix.dovienya.xi 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely! Very well done. |
| Natsuyori 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuselovely work! amazing beauty! |
| Paranoid Sarcasm 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI like this, it's really good. |
| Sesshomaru-is-my-master 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI love it and it is beautiful |
| morena-forever 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abusethats so sweet i loved it it protrays what a lot of us want it was so sweet |
| estal0ne11 2005-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseawwee!! how cute! this put a smile on my face :-P hehe |