it makes me cry that since you havent updated for just under a year, this amazing fic probably wont get finished. shame -i really want to know how it turns out!

This story is AWSOME xx. Sorry thats such a lame comment but It is so late here I can't explain why i like it. Maybe next time. *sleeps*

COOL!! I LOVE Jazz stories!

Wow. This is quite the story - even though the only things I know about Transformers I got off the new movie, this was still easy to follow. Jazz was my favourite movie character, and I was so disappointed when he was the one Autobot who died.

Oh isn't that so Jazz...heh, such a gentlemech. I think I'll like Jia Mei, she sounds fun. I also like the parallels you put in between their very different lives and how sometimes it's really not so different.

Heh, always a gentlemech eh? I really like that about Jazz, the 'human' side of him and his innate ability to interact with people. But yet again, this is going to be something chalked up to his alter ego and not him. It takes a lot of humility to be able to keep up that kind of facade

Just had to put in another human character, eh? Jia Mei sounds like a poor ol' thing. I wonder how Jazz's wonderful sportish Mazda form did not get rooted out in the carpark and the hidey-hole. He would've stuck out like a sore thumb.

But, anywho, nice introduction and integration of the new character. ^^ And Jazz being the real nice and friendly Jazz we all love.

-MZ

No there's no more chapters...Awesome story, loving how its turning out so keep it up!

Eagerly anticipated, but well worth the wait. I can totally see Prowl's deadpan blandness throughout parts of that conversation. I love it.

Poor Jazz... he dun know what he got himself into with Dash, do he? *gryn*

Will wait patiently for more. *pokes*

I just have to say that I really, really like Dash. He's blunt, to the point and sensible. More please!

Thank you for updating. I liked the chapter a lot but I wish Jazz was in it. Such is life. Please update again soon.

Just finished reading all you had up. You do a really good job with Jazz. I wish Dash was still on the case, he was cool.

It doesn't make a scrap of difference for the fic, but at least we know who Meister is, even if the rest of the cast don't. Wonderful characterization with Meister accomplishing and being remembered more than Jazz. Glad you're still putting up chapters from this, even if it takes me a long while to review. :)

Just one point that I found very fascinating here- Jazz missing being recognised, both for his looks and for his accomplishments. It's a great character point that you've put in here

I like this one for a few reasons. One of the major ones would be that I like the bit in the beginning where he has the 'envy' toward Meister. He doesn't often show it, but a bot like Jazz has to have some sort of an ego. And in instances like these, it shows. He's a bot with style, and if no one sees it or knows it was him, it's all lost. I also like how he dealt with the situation. Made sure not to offend, but still got his point across so he could leave. Even the tough feds are helpless against his mighty suaveness ;) Great chapter and I look forward to more!