That's sad... I was wondering why the story went right into the little lovey-dovey scene at the begining. But when he woke up, it all made sence. It's so sad...

O_O wow more more!!

poor ed. ;_;
*sighs* a sad, but very nice story. i liked it muchly, as they both were in character and, dude, the sadness!! >_

You have made me squee quite happily with fangirl glee.

...Which also meant I ruined my "I am a heartless **" image that I've set up with my friends. But still, I'm happy, because this was so cute and squeeable. The ending was just plain mean, but I can't say I wasn't expecting a nasty twist.

Anyway, much love.

Aww, this was so cute! *sniffle* and sad too...
I would have reviewed earlier, but the stupid school computers wouldn't let me log in...

NO! this ending is too sad! But really fitting.

Excellent, but very sad. I really liked your description of Roy's scent and I appreciated that it wasn't something that no person would ever naturally smell like (ex, strawberrys, honey, etc) or fire/ash which I think is too common. My only other comment is... *sniffles* poor Ed and Roy...