great story and by the way I like how you twist the story at certain parts to make it funny like the anime

Wtf am I reading! Well at least its not as crazy as some others I Have read but at least entertaining

Ahahahaha Love that last chapter

I so love your story so much is it complete?

Please continue writing.

One thing.

How did Flonne manage to pull that off?

She doesn't seem to be like the kind to ignore her kids... or any kid.

She'd probably teach them to be loving half-demons.

Oh my God I love this chapter ! You're so awsome ! So glad there were no OOC :3 .. more Laharl x Flonne please XD XD

XD omg, i love the kids, and how the hell did Flonne hide for 9 months and how old r these kids? XD either Laharl is EXTREAMLY dense, or Flonne knows a good hiding place, XD either 1 is just fine, but then damn, Flonne can hide for 9 months without no one noticing *nods* Oh yeah, the wedding would be a fun thing trying to explain the little evil demons running around.

Aw! So cute! I lovey this pairing so muchy! Pretty pleazey write more soon!

so... wanna do me a BIG favor &..oh i dont know.. maybe UPDATE? that'd be great.. like your stories.. cause i'm basically obsessd w/ the whole laharl-and-flonne-are-totally-in-love-and-etna-makes-fun-of-them-every-chance-she-gets sort of thing. keep it up.. PLEASE.

That was so cute! But why did Etna have to interrupt! :[

Um, Miss? It doesn't make a lot of sense how Flonne, Etna, Laharl and countless other demons could live in the same castle and NOT notice Flonne being pregnent, TWICE (that is, if the two children aren't twins). I also think you make your chapters far too short, I want something to read for like, a half an hour or even an hour, not something I can read in 3 minutes! Your chapters are short and sweet, but wouldn't it be nice if we could read long and sweet?

Also, I think you should put more detail into your chapters, it's hard to imagine the scene in your head if you only know what people are saying!

If you have a hard time thinking of how to put in detail (As I sometimes do), just imagine the scene in your head, and think of the best way you see to describe it.

I hope that was an okay review, I tried to be "well rounded" like it says at the bottom. Keep up the good work!

Sincerely, Yuifen.

But there IS a Disgaea 2 D...well...coming out anyways ;

Dude! That was fast!

*imagines a "boy looked like Laharl but with blonde hair and the girl looked like Flonne but with purple/blue hair"*

Awesome. :)

LOL! Mid Boss totally rocks...

Short, but sweet!

Nifty little story you have here. Cute, in fact. Keep it up, it only gets better from how I see it.