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| Pinfeathers 2008-07-03 ch 9, | abuseI liked the story, It was interesting. I liked what you did, reversing Seth and BEWD as light and dark. |
| Kuyeng13 2006-11-05 ch 1, | abuseOh my isn't Seto a cutie in this one... |
| Mishiko Shinsei 2006-05-22 ch 9, | abuseNot only do I LOVE the story, I have recommended it to other YGO fan fic fans. Your adaptation is excellent, your pacing is flawless, and your characters well defined. Quite a work! Thanks for sharing! |
| Serenity of Paradise 2006-03-22 ch 9, | abusetears* I love this story soo much..it's moving and touching...sniff.sniff...please continue to write |
| dani's random fox 2005-09-05 ch 9, | abuseReally good! Omg I love this story! It's so cute...I wonder what will happen next? |
| kenmeishouri 2005-08-17 ch 9, | abuseno!! that's like a cliffie!! plz add an appropriate ending!! :( beautiful as u'r story may have been... it needs an awesome ending! plz? plz add an ending? an aftermath is all i ask for! it need not be lengthy! |
| Nachzes Black-Rider 2005-07-30 ch 9, | abuseYeah...'course I read your ficcies. Besides, I'm not old enough to drink and refuse to anyways! Love the chapter...LEMONLEMONLEMON! -is dying from lack of **- But it was good anyways. I'm back from France. |
| sevter 2005-07-29 ch 9, | abuseEh? WHAT? Your ending is screwy. Lolz. Still, I enjoyed your fic a lot, because of the fluff really, rather than in spite of it. You left yourself a lot of loopholes there. For example, what happens next? Will Mokuba and Seto know that they're brothers? Will Seto return to his kingdom? Can he? ecetera ecetera ecetera... |
| mariko 2005-07-19 ch 9, anon. | abuselovely. but i wish u'd write another chappie to finish it up fully. |
| Tamlin, the Unsigned 2005-07-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseI love it. I loved your characters. I loved the plot. I loved how everyone had a good and a bad side. I adored the BEWD as a yami. I just loved everything. I can't wait to see your new SS story.I am so envious. You are a great writer. |
| Ninja Froggy 2005-07-19 ch 9, anon. | abuse*Blink* So... that's how it ends, eh? Alrightie... I can live with that. Yay for happy psycho endings. Having the BEWD as a yami was a rather creative idea, I'll give you that. Yay for hope and a large bed! P.S. ...Haven't heard from you via e-mail lately... I feel so abandoned. *Cry* lol Cookie for your greatness btw. ^^ |
| MOG 2005-07-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseMOG:{Glomps}AW! How could I pass up a chance to read a good Seth/Seto fic? And indeed, we all are. LOL I DID enjoy it and am terribly sad it's over. :{ Oh well, I think I'll see what else you've written! :} |
| TheUnlovedOutcast 2005-07-19 ch 9, anon. | abuse*Glomps* I loved it, thank you. ^.^ Ja Ne, TheUnlovedOutcast |
| Sapphire Siren 2005-07-19 ch 9, | abuseThat... was just... COOL... XD I liked how you mixed the two endings. OO Turned out really nicely. (By the way, I loved 'The Seven Shades', don't get me wrong. XD) And nice work with the assumptions. XD I was almost going to ask you what Atemu had to say about all of this, but then I remembered... you said you assume he was ok with it. XD And man... finding out Mokuba was Seto's brother-- *hits herself for how stupid that sounds* --that was something I didn't see coming. Cute touch, though. XD They can all be one happy family! >> Seto's wearing the dress to the wedding! Mwahahaha... corsets... *coughs* Anyway, you did such a nice job with the plot! *cries because of it* (The chess game as cute, too. Along with the molestation after it. O_o) ... I just realized something... 'All too suddenly, reality hit and the lord sprang back instantly.' XD *sings* Twelve lords-a-leaping! *imagining twelve Seths jumping, eyes widen* ... That's an odd thought. *pets the Blue-eyes* By the way, I hope you don't mind, but I added you to AIM. ^^ And you don't need to write a lemon. XD I think it's good enough as it is. And I think this review is long enough. X_x So I'm just going to leave it with a: THIS STORY WAS FREAKING AWESOME! ~SS |
| Kurosaisei 2005-07-19 ch 9, | abuseOkay, my head is going in circles. I'm gonna have to reread it when I'm more awake. But from what I got; OMFG. -coughcough- okay, let me rephrase that. WOW. I adore what I read and the ending seems like it fits (after I've assumed everything you told us to assume) and etc.etc.etc.etc.etc. everything I've said in all the other reviews. Erm, shameless flattery, anyway. I don't think they count as reviews. So yesh. I luffs. And I think I saw you online today, but I was busy burning anime and my computer would have died if I tried to talk. Boohoo. ...Did I get first review? Aren't we two the only people ever up at this time? (Well, you know what I mean.) |