I LOVE IT! Please keep writing this wrtiting is flawless!
Ok one complainent can you PLEASE make it longer?

well, well, well what do we have here.?? Hiei's daughter... sound interesting.. I love it!^-^ Ione question are their gonna be any fights in here?? really good though.

Write faster please. A lot of you writers makes us readers suffer you people update to slow.

So everyone is changing. Unexpected couples to say the least.

hehe... this is going to keep me smileing through the school day. Great job!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

It's a pretty good story so far, but it would be nicer if you could make the chapters a little longer amd maybe put some more description in. It just seems like everythings moving a little too fast. It's an interesting idea though, and I LOVE the pairings! And don't let the flamers get you down, not everyone will like your fics, but there are twice as many people who do like them then don't so don't worry about the ones who don't like them. Update when you have time please!

that's cool!plz update soon.

DIE! HOW DARE YOU PUT KEIKO W/ HIEI! YOU WILL DIE FOR YOUR DEFILEMENT OF HIEI!

hehehehehe kol! please update son! ^_^

Ja ne!

|+| Akira |+|

WOW! Continue and don't be discouraged by some people. It's your story and even though its short your doing great. It's your first time so shake it off and continue to do your best. I expect more, please update soon.
Your imaginary friend, Kit...^.^
Wanna be my friend?

this whole fic is so short it is even shorter then this sentence! i dnt really feel like reading past this chapter now, im afraid i'll be finished in like 3 secs, and even tho it takes no time at all, it still a waste of 3 seconds!! so im not gonna continue reading this. it way too short not to mention rubbish. if i woz u, i'd stop writing up this story because its a load of bull

Good story needs more dialogue though

oh i wonder what hiei's and keiko's reactions will be, this will be entertaining. Please update soon, Ja Ne

PLEASE PLEASE update next CHAPPIE soon ^.^

very short. shorter than my first chapter...that means it should get better! don't worry i know how hard it is to get started.