Wow, that was great and of course sad. I loved how she made a 180 from her child self because she was such a snob. Pfft. Anywho nice work.

Wow, I like this story. Pretty depressing, but all in all very very good! Keep writing!

amazing.truly amazing.

Maybe it's just me, but is there a formula starting to emerge for these? I couldn't help finding an enormous similarity between this and Smiling, and basically the other pseudo angsty old-charge fics. It's just that you could take any character from any fandom and write this type of fanfic about them. Won't whine too much, because if you ignore all that, it's a pretty good story.

This story really gripped me. You have such a skill in writing. *claps hands a little to loudly* A true angst good job!

this is really good. I love angst stories.

it was pretty good... until you started swearing... im sorry but i dont see a point of swearing and i think you should make it less intense and less swearing. but let me know if you add another chapter

Interesting, and great. I'd never have thought that Amanda could become like that, but it makes sense.

Wow, this is so good!

Dark, disturbing, and great one-shot. I never liked the character of Amanda all that much, she seemed too much like the spoled rich girl for my tastes, but you did a great job of making her seem sympathetic and likable. Great one-shot. Keep writing and keep up the good work.

wow, i dont think i ever saw an amanda story before-but this was one of the best written one shots from a minor character good job