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Reviews For: Unfinished Business

ChocoBetty
2006-10-16
ch 3,
abuseSorry, screwed it up. I just haven't seen that there is another chapter, but now I will read it and review than, this is just the first thing I needed to write down.

Oh, this is cute, love the ending. Nice, little fic. It was great reading it (even though I should look more carefully if there is another chapter BEFORE I complain ;-) ).
ChocoBetty
2006-10-16
ch 2,
abuseAt the end it says "To Be Continued" and the note above says the story is "Complete". What is it now? Is there any chance of another chapter and maybe reading what Danny has Mac to tell? I would really love to know how this one goes on.
SiniseLuvr
2006-03-08
ch 3,
abuseCan I die and go to MacDanny heaven now?? Ek this was cute!!
EriksAngelFire1
2005-05-29
ch 3,
abuseAw!! So cute! Any sequal? Really good story - especially Flack setting them up!
Kuroi Neko-kun
2005-05-17
ch 3,
abuseAh! Don't end there!! Don't end there! You can't!! -sigh- Hopefully, this have some sort of continuation.
Megakitty
2005-05-13
ch 2, anon.
abuseOH! That was just plain mean! Update update update soon PLEZE
Kuroi Neko-kun
2005-05-13
ch 2,
abuseOh... Is he going to confess?! -sits at the edge of her seat- CONTINUE! DON'T END THERE!
Kuroi Neko-kun
2005-05-10
ch 1,
abuseWhoa... This is intensed. I'm keeping an eye on this one for sure. Continue please!
XxBandGeekxX
2005-05-10
ch 1,
abuseGreat start! Been waiting for a fic dealing with that episode! You are awsome! Can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
missiemeghan
2005-05-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseGood start. Keep going!
MegaKitty
2005-05-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseLooks like I'm your first review. Yay me. I like the story so far. Please update soon
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