Hey, when I looked at the summary of this I thought that it would be stupid but I gave it a shot and I thought that it was so funny, and very original. I like writers with different and 'whacked out' ideas for their stories and I love this one. Update soon, please?

Now, this is something entirely different! Wonderful! You have renewed my faith in the infinite capacity of the human mind to come up with ideas.

Technically perfect, as usual. Your ability to creep into the mind of Gippal and feel as he must is amazing. The bit about learning to walk with wider, differently angled hips is a touch of realism I did not expect. One question - would his newly narrowed shoulder have been capacious enough to hold Baralai? And I am cringing at the idea of Nooj with breasts. Oh the horror!

Brava. For the first time in months, I am eager for the next chapter of a tale.