Is it Guile?

Moi do believe you are writing about Pierre. I like my cookies with chocolate chips, please. Wow! Well written, short and sweet. You have an uncanny knack for turning a phrase. Well done!
One thing, though--write something longer. Your particular style will shine in a multi-chapter fic. Good luck!

It's Pierre, right? I never particularly liked him, but this is an interesting take on his character. Good job!

umm...Zoah?

Turnip.

hiya! i have a lot of guesses so il say the three i like the most...is it Leena,Starky(man i love that little martian) or could it be that funguy

is it Glenn?

I am not going to spoil this with the guesses I had for character ideas; to do so would be to try and paint my own impressions over the work you have done, and that would be criminal. This story is very nice: compact and graceful with a nice, concise tone and good ending. Excellent work, and thanks for reviewing me.

I know who this is, and I want to catch it in a cage, take away its shiny Hero's metal and make it cry. :) Nice insight though. Love the last line. More...? (Yes I'm crazy.)