David Marcus seems to be a forgotten chara in the TOS fanfiction- and the romance he had with Saavik (at least in the novelizations of ST II & I). Thanks for bringing him back to life!

I am SO glad I'm not alone here!
I like the story. Iss really good. Yah.

Oh God, this is so poignant it's almost painful. Good work!

Gees, you are so evil! So disgustingly evil! How you do these small bits so wonderfully! I've always thought Saavik an David should've been together, but I know I'm in the minority here. But you did a magnificent job of making a great case for the two of them here. The whole scene was done beautifully, of a young man daydreaming of what might have been, com[pletely unware of what was actually laying ahead for him. Or yet in the end, does he have some inkling of the future for him? I don't know you did an excellent job of kinda leaving that thought open too...Yes, a wonderfully done piece!

WAHH! Talk about dreams unlived, goals unmet, lives cut short. So freakin' sad. Good job, Farfalla! *sniff*