Yes! I can see it happening that way! Nice writing!

Very well done! I think you did such a great job. They are so cute togeteher. Thanks

Very cute...^-^

Brilliant and ingenious ending and very humorously written. I commend you!

That last line is absolutely perfect! I've been needing a JackStephen fix for a while and this fit the bill in every way! Bravo!

~ Verona

Oh, this made me happy I liked it very much. I thought that the characters were well portrayed, I like that Stephen gets momentarily distracted by the tortoises, very Stephen-like.

Brilliant! ^-^

Oh! Cuddly, sweet and funny, too! And just my level of slash. Thanks for sharing this. It made my day.

*Wolf whistle* I love Jack/Stephen fics. Very humourous ending (I iwshed for a bit more of the sex,but this works out just fine)

Well written and humorous, but please give a warning if the fic is going to contain gay issues =\ That was disturbing..

that was a good fic.

i liked the ending, humorous and wasn't quite expecting tortoises. :o)

Very well written! My only issue is, why would they have any trouble finding a way to be alone together, when the captain has his own quarters? Or did they just really want to do it outside?

Ah! That's what I love to read: excellently written Jack and Stephen. Thank you so much!

This was a very cute fic! God Job!