I thought it was pretty good, except for the fact that you put what the characters were doing as part of the dialogue, y'know, the italicized stuff. It really just crushed the whole feel of the story and made me feel like I was reading a movie script. Other than that, pretty good.

Simba out

o.o!! wow... that was a big lemon in the beginning... >< but very cute story!! keep on writing!! ^.^

THE BEAUTY/ART OF WRITING! HOW WONDERFUL IT IS!
I love it! Continue!

That was really good and was well writen, its great that cloud and aerith are back together and got married, and i like how you put squall and rinoa together at the end. Your very good at writing these type of stories it seems

oh wow i really liked it ^^ its cute... (pairings) aniways ... heyy! im the first to gib you a comment! aniways you earned it... nice story
ps.. if you make more stories of aerith and cloud i will read it heheheheehehhe ^^