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| Autumnights 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseOh that was so good! I love how you incoorperated the stell and paper speech in there. This just made me think of something for whatever reason. Do you think Zoro is tickleish? |
| The Wandering Swordsman 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseIt's cute! I like Zoro hugging the teddy bear! AW~!! Everyone has teddy bears...right? *hugs own* |
| Ryuu the Magnificent 2006-10-14 ch 1, | abusevery cute and in charictor, with a few minor spelling mistakes. Great! |
| jade-blue 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseaw! ECCELLENTE! I adore your one shots. that ending was so cute! |
| PhantomSky 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseIt's so cute! I nearly cried at the cuteness of it!! |
| thermopylae 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuseHahaha. That is so cute. I imagine Zoro looks so happy when Mr. FooFoo is safely nestled in his big brawny man-arms! |
| Darkdaisy 2006-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abusei |
| Saiyako 2005-10-27 ch 1, | abuseHa. Of course the ONLY reason Zoro would ever have a teddy bear is because it was hers... I love the realism of the flashback - there are always things you'd never guess about someone, that you only find out after they're gone. This is beautiful. |
| Lenna Hunter 2005-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw! its so cute! |
| Kokis 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseAra ara... isn't this sweet... My little Zoro. Ofcourse he han be weak once in a while. Nobody can be so strong they never mourn or doubt. And it suits him kind of well to have a voulnerable spot like that. And the thing that it is such a childish thing as a teddybear is supercute! It contains memories... Nice nice... Liked it a lot! Arigatou! |
| Angie-chan 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuseHee... Teddy. |
| Code Name Adania 2005-07-12 ch 1, | abuseDefinite happiness! =) This was so cute!! I think everyone's character was spot on. Awesome job!! |
| Akuun Ato 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abuseSO CUTE! T.T very good point. a moral lesson to keep close. |
| Darkday Chaos 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuse... ((BZZT)) ... I enjoyed it greatly. The idea strikes me as fitting, somehow. Maybe it's just because of Polar Yuki, my red-ribboned bear... But, nevermind that! Your style is great. Maybe the spelling could be checked over once more, but nevertheless enjoyable. Keep it up. Chaos out. ... ((BZZT)) ... |
| Netbug009 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseAww, how sweet! And funny! Tell us more! |