I feel your pain. I wanna god cards too. And u would not believe how much it irks me not to have a dark magician and dark magician girl.

Excellant story, with intriging characters.

keep up the good work!


'But the very next question nearly floored him. “State the effect of the Ultimate Obedient Fiend.”

Yugo nearly swore. He had no idea what the effect of the Ultimate Obedient Fiend (ATK 3500, DEF 30) was, for he’d never even heard of that card before.'

LOL! I have a japanesse and an english version of Ultimate Obedient Fiend! Its effect is bad though, ye can only attack if ye have no monsters on your side of the field and no cards in your hand :( Still brilliant!

holycrap thats a big story you have here over million words if you count your sequel -_-'

(anime tears) thank you so much for doing a future version of Yugioh I've wanted to do that for a long time but I either get writers block or don't have time because of school. I like the fact that you made even the main character friends duelist...It made what the villians say true when in the anime they called Yugi's friends "cheerleaders" (except for Joey I like his deck) I still want to do one but if you have any tips or ideas please tell me I'll love to hear them.

Wow even more angst but it adds to the drama! I can't wait for Round 2 and personallt I'm hoping Malachi gets the snot beaten out of him but I doubt it sadly. Still, your story is awesome! Onto the next chapter!

Hi! Wow, been so long since I reviewed so sorry! Yay Kyo won! And poor Raven, I hope he'll be better soon but nice chapter though there was angst but that's what makes a good story. Well onto the next chapter!

OMG, that was freaky! Poor Raven, I want to kill Malachi right now but I'll hold myself back. Hope Kyo can win his duel.

THE PYRAMID OF LIGHT?! No way, that got destroyed, how can Malachi have it? Anyways, Malachi's freaky and with the Pyramid of Light, ah man Raven'i in BIG trouble.

A great duel and Seta won, not much of a suprise. Malachi's creeping me out, wonder if Raven can win? Only one way to find out.

Nice duel and Wade won, I guess that's cool. Next is Seta vs. Honey, not sure who I want to win but I'll enjoy seeing who does.

Wow, what an awesome duel! And Jenna won, alright! Anyways now it's Wade vs vs. Flora, Water vs. Bugs. This should be an intresting duel indeed.

Yay Miki won! She's really come long way since her first duel, way to go Miki! Time for the nextduel, can't wat to see what happens next!

Agh! Stupid cliffhangers, I hate them so much! Ah well, great duel so far, Miki's really improved but now Shiego summoned Gilford of Lightning? Miki better be careful.

Wow, been a while since I reviewed sorry about that. Anyways, yay Yugo won! Now Miki's gonna duel, hope she can win this time.

man it's only chapter 7 that i been reading yethow were you able to write 321 chapter that are probably the same length?