Oh this is really great! I really wish you would continue! :)

THX

DUDE That was awsome! I love it! Oh my goodness Pauline and then Bruce and the stupid dad and oh my goodness this was such a good chapter! Okay so don't worry about updating take your time and feel the creative juices flow I mean look how long it took me to update. Can't wait can't wait for the next chapter!

Astar!

ello!! me again!! this fic is really AU from the whole book (which i have read thank u very much) i mean they don't really talk about jack's parents let alone anyones except that ralphs dad was in the navy... but i guess thats y they call them fanfiction... ok well its good if u would UPDATE! *cough cough* srry bout that... ok hasta luego (spanish use ur online translater for it!! lol)

aww jack has a friend!

A little bit confused, but still AweSomE!
Can't wait for another update!

Love it!
Awesome!
Update soon!

*Singing* It's a priest it's a preist it's a preist! I love preist! *laughs* sorry but I really do! Good Chapter!

That was so good!! Please contiune!

yeah you updated! i've been waiting for a update. you don't like this story? i like it and so do other people. update soon!

Great so far. Keep going.

Update soon!
Really awesome!

Interseting. I like it. Please continue.

Aww again all have to say is poor jack...
anyways good as always hope to read more soon! Gonna see Star Wars I on saturday can't wait!

Astar

uh ohh...

OH MY GOD ! RECENT LOTF FICS! Poor Jack. Father's an **. Well written!