Nice Story and please update soon it really good.

please update!

that was sweet plz update i read the first one aslwell i cried like a billiion times out of sadness rage and happeness yo should bring the others in more often. update soon you know what sad that things like this really happen and most of the time the ending dosne;t come out the way yugis did and thats what made me so sad but i did like it you are a wxwlwnt writer

nice story

i love the story. i have an idea. mayby yugi could get kiddnapped and yami and bakura would have to sell the house for randsom. its mean, but so exsiting. please keep writing.

Good chapter please update this is really interesting!

Good chapter!

I cried this chapter I may miss it budt happy birth cause the fic says it's your b-day!

Someone is after Yugi? Please update soon.

how is this one going to be a 100 times better if ur not going to finish it? anyway good story. hope you finish it!

I hope you finish this it is really good. So far I have loved every one of your stories I have read.

Hey, when are you going to continued with this chapter?
Whe are all waiting for it. So, please will you make the next chapter?

THANKS

from a yu-gi-oh fan

How creepy.Who is after Yugi? A friend of Yugi's father?This story is so good as the first one. It's like the story never ended. you doing great job. I can't wait until next chapter. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

from a yu-gi-oh

please get another chapter out soon. This fic is too good to be left unfinished.

please continue