good job, but there's room for improvment for 'angstiness' and grammar. i liked the idea of the fic.

btw, i believe it's "terra", not "tara".

keep on improving! (btw, i love the penname)

yours in Christ,
HeiLong

I like your simple style in writing. I think this fanfic was great. It was so sad and romantic. I loved it! But I think you should use more periods and kama's next time, because I got a bit confused in some parts without them. Oh and, the girl's name is Terra, not Tara,(though Tara is her real name in the comics.)

keep on writing! :)

THAT ROCKED!

Great beginning paragraphe. Really sets the mood. How it seems that the Titans don't really try to include her anymore, how they've given up.

Don't really like the hints of romance in here, but then again, that's just my own prejudice and you shouldn't change it 'cause I think that you pulled it off fairly well. Not too sappy, so that's okay.

Maybe a bit more on how she thinks of herself as a monster, as dangerous to her friends? That to me is what makes Raven so fascinating, how she is afraid of herself. Another thing, I like how you didn't make Raven seem whiney, complaining about her curse. You made her seem to accept and deal with it, and I like that.

Good fic, will do just as good as a one-shot as a whole fic. Just be careful not to lose what makes it so powerful, 'cause this stuff is good.

People enter relationships which are not based on emotion all the time. Business partnerships, for example. Some people also have relationships that are based on the purely physical attraction and not on the emotional content. I hardly think that any relationship between Raven and Beast Boy should be based on emotion. Why not let it be purely based on the physical attraction they have for each other?