 Blue Eyes At Night 2005-05-11 . chapter 1Lol!
A perfect little ending there! Such a cute little allude to the first Mummy movie!
Ah, not an Imp/Anck! I suppose its ok that u did Evy/Rick tho, they are ? they're characters just fuse together for the perfect foils! though, not to be insulting, cutesy little items without angst seem to be a bit lemony coming from an author who can so masterfully illustrate the bittersweetness of love, the dark and the light.
Although I loved this fic, I think it would be a compliment to your skill to analize (yeah there my honors english spelling! woot!) Ardeth Bay. The way you work Lucian's character, the way you work Imp and Anck...just imagine if you could weave a web of Ardeth Bay? Cheiftain of the Twelve Tribes of the MedJai and unconfirmed bachelor...there's a wonderufl character for you! very bittersweet. feel free to contact me if u ever wanna talk about these comments, just look on my profile |