I loved the story. Chloe's a tough girl but not as tough as she lets everyone believe.

That was nice. Very pleasant and sweet to read.:)

I about jumped up and down at the site of a Jack/Chloe story - absolutely one of my favorite pairings.

A lovely vignette...I hope you'll write more.

Yay! I love seeing a new Jack/Chloe story here! I could definitely picture something like that happening on the show. I especially love your description of Chloe referring to her earlier conversation with Edgar, and Jack getting confused. (After last Monday's show, I'm just in love with the image of Jack being utterly baffled by her.) Great start, and I'd love to see you continue with this!