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| BlueyGooz 2008-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI didn't really get it but it was a nice display of psychology and diction. It's definitely deep and very intriguing. :) Good job! |
| anonymous sheep 2008-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery...diffrent. Angsty-whimsical in a sense that kept me reading :) good job. |
| recombiantDNA 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abusei'm not quite sure how to comment on that... it's really good and dark, who are the characters though? hermioneX? is it riddle? |
| Tommy14 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI got goosebumps reading this. Wonderful story. |
| ZippyRox 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseOh, I liked that. It was very vague, just the way it should be. Well done^^ |
| Dark Emo Shadow 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusewat i dun really get it can you please explain? |
| Evernia 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseIt takes a master to take such simple sentences and weave them together into such a complex story. The simplicity makes the piece. It wouldn't be the same with more complicated sentences. Haunting and beautiful. Lots of things said between the lines, and inferences have to be made. You can just tell that this is one piece that you can read over and over and you keep finding new meanings hidden in the things not said. As well as a good story structure and a wonderful voice, the plot is very nice too. Bravo. One for the favorites list. |
| Emriel 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseWah... another dark tale... a bit confusing at the end but still great XD. well done ^_^ |
| Le-Rain 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseOnce again...your writing is so exquisite. |
| Venomous Guise 2006-11-30 ch 1, | abuseVery suggestive...very creepy...very great! Brilliant! |
| MissKittyMay 2006-10-15 ch 1, | abuseYou create an atmosphere so well...I loved this disturbing little tale! |
| Caravana 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abuseTortuous and mysterious, you story is the best one shot (in english) I've ever read. It's original and neat, and I know it will sound grandiloquent and a bit exaggerated, but when I discovered your fic, it was like if I found a rough diamond. It's difficult to find stories like this one. Keep on writing. gisse |
| Bagge 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseAnother extremely creepy, and extremly well written fic. Hermione of all people was a match for Tom Riddle - but even she slipped in the end, and what a beautiful ruin she made. Red ink, cold hands, a snow angle that now is gone. Your suggestive way of writing is marvelous. I have to read and reread to understand what happends, but all the time I know that things are going seriously wrong. I love Luna's brief part of it, and I love the battle between Tom and Hermione; He hates her. She hates him. Wonderful story! |
| mejara 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abusethat was a good one-shot. i sort of stumbled upon it by accident, but i'm quite happy about that ^^ very mysterious and angsty (imho) but if you don't know the general idea behind it, it doesn't all come together all that easily...still very nice though! |
| Luthien Amarie 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseNow, this was intriguing, to say the least... It's stories like this one that usually make my day, as twisted and creepy as they may appear - and yours came out as one of the best things here on I ever came to read! I loved your work for it's uniqueness, as well in plot as in style. Even if the sentences are short and appear a bit snatchy, they are just captivating, making it impossible to do something else than read through the whole story. You don't see that often, and for this I just have to compliment you! And while many people might consider your story "morbid" or "freaky", I just love it more... I wish I myself could have such great ideas sometimes... *sighs* Well, now I've written enough choppy, ineloquent sentences to make you think I'm a complete idiot, but oh well... I'm still deep into your story, plus I'm not a native English speaker and even if my skills aren't that bad, sometimes I lack words as to express what I really want to say... Hm. Come to think of it, happens in my mothertongue as well... *scratches her head* Well, whatever - thank you for this great piece of art, and forgive me for rambling about it like an idiot. ^^, Best wihses, LĂșthien |