gah!

u're so good at angst... it breaks my heart.

hint of tatsumixhisoka there?

That was...so ...touching.You're an awesome writer.Keep up the good work!

I'm not going to lie. This disturbed me deeply. Death... unhappy endings... They're so... depressing. This was wonderfully written,and I enjoyed reading it. But...like I said, I was disturbed. It's rather unsetteling to read things like this. I'm left with an empty feeling...

I wonder... do you really think that would happen with them?

Now I'm going to read something else you wrote in hopes of finding something happy. XD
-MF

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...how sad... poor Hisoka. I liked it. The five scenes summed up the whole story very well. I felt something was possibly missing - maybe extending some of the scenes a little more? But it was an interesting concept, and ... sad. It's so sad when something happens between them and throws them apart, I'm such a sucker for happy endings...
That's an interesting saying. There's something so interesting in Hisoka naivete and how he takes everything either in disdain if he doesn't understand it, or literally, and then how it's usually because of Tsuzuki that he finds different meaning in it.

Nice and deep. Just the way I like it.

wow *_* i love it!! thanks for write it!!