LMFAO. Poor poor wolves

lOLZ The end was funny! Nice!

he is funny tell him i said that he would make a great children's author.

omg, that was cute! poor kouga!

Awesome! I loved the ending! Awesome job!
-WT

I liked it.

HAHA NICE TELL UR BRO GOOD JOB!

^_^ kee hee!
and i like watched that movie a week ago!

SO CUTE! and ya know inuyasha was going to like it! hee hee! ah, man, to see koga's reaction...

Your little brother rox my sox.

Oh I love it! You ought to write more of these!

Hehe... I like it! ;-) This was really fantastic! The last line was especially good... Also, everyone was in character, which is sometimes hard with this kind of story. Good job!

LOL I liked this one shot! great job for you and your little brother! HA HA, poor Koga. I espailay(sp) Like the "punch line" from Inuyasha in the end!
I never touched a bb gun in my life but I think I saw one once... (Sheltered child here...)
I also read your fic Kagome's voice and Inuyasha's love.
a really good fic!
Keep up the good work and praise your little brother for is idea!
Donamarine!

That was a cute story. give him credit from me
_blueeyedchibi_

THIS STORY WAS SO CUTE! I loved the idea tell your baby bro to come up with more of them, yeah? The only thing I wish you would do is write what Kouga does when he wakes up... would he risk getting Kagome's scorn by beating up Shippou? HAHAHAHA! I'm laughing just thinking about it! Anyway, great story!

that was a good story, that is seriously what would happen if Shippo had a gun!