*Gasp* Its Jackson I no it! MEN CANNOT BE TRUSTED! Andway... I like it... keep going!

great starting, please write more!!

OMG! I love that song!! I have it for a ring tone on my cell! um... sry! Good chapter!! Kinda short though! Can't wait for the next one!!

Mina

That was a great first 3 chapters! The chapters are kinda shory, and you may want to make them a little longer if you have time. Can't wait for the next chapters!

good fic. I was rather surprised to see you on this site, but the RaeBB is welcomed by me with open arms. The chapters are quite short, but it is the content that counts. And, it wqaas quite good. I believe that you captured Raven well. Keep writing, and update soon.

Very cool please read my story Raven's little sis it's exciting review please

Please update soon! TTFN, Tata fo rnow!

Nicely done. You've done well thusfar, and you've kept them in character rather well as well. I can't wait to see more.^_^

Oh, by the way, do you have intended for the next chapter being that Raven ends up saving BB, or possibly, when her back is turned, a large blast from someone(like Dr. Light or Jinx) is sent towards her too quickly for her to dodge or block, and BB takes the full force of the blast for her while knocking her out of the way of the blast? These are just ideas, of course, but they might help give ya some inspiration.^_^

Oh, and if you involve Raven's emotions at all, I know of a few good fics that could help you out with Raven's emotions.^_^ BlueTitan's fics are all good, and he keeps everyone in character nicely, but he does have a few extra emotions on his "Birthday Reflections"(or was it Revelations?) that aren't in the show or comic. They're commonly mistaken ones though, so it's no biggie. And there's also Demigod's "Seven Years' Bad Luck in One Day". It has all of her emotions, with a twist while they're out of her mind. It's goin' well now, and I'm sure you'll like it.

Oh, and also, will you have it so that Raven's cloak will lighten as she accepts more and more of her feelings? She wouldn't accept her feelings for him immediately though. For instance, when she's accepted the fact that she's attracted to him, her cloak could become light blue. Later on, it could become sky blue, then off white, and finally, pure white once she has fully accepted her emotions and is ready to reveal her feelings to him completely. Of course, these are just ideas. It's up to you as to whether or not you'll use them.^_^ Either way though, I can't wait to see more of this fic. Great job.^_^

THAT SUCKED! YOU SUCK TOO!

(p.s. This is a flame)

(p.p.s. This flame is courtesy of CTTC, the Crusaders of the True Titans Couples)

(p.p.p.s. BB&Rae are not one of the True Couples)

Update ASAP! COol chapter

How come no one's goin' into that store!? Update soon!

Mina

HEY! Loved the idea of doing songs in the beginning of each chapter! I love BOTH of those songs too! keep up the good work! By the way, I have a question about posting your story. Plz email me! Thanx!
Much Luv,
Givgirl

really good! hehe! update soon!

Dude, i think that is pritty creepy, that no one is going into the store!!
or maybe it's just me.

sounds cool so far