Love it :) You need to update soon :P

you should update again

good story please update soon.

great story please update soon

I love it! It's so realistic as if this has happened...I don't know. Your stories are just so good, I feel as if I'm actually in the story! IT's real good! Keep up the good work!

hey, update when u can, i want them all to be as good as the ones before:) (YES I DID JUST SAY THEY WERE ALL GOOD)

Gr8 job, dally seems a bit outa charactor, but thats bout it. I really wanna see what pony, soda, n johnny r lik, n how protective dally is of him!..neways...

Update when u can (possably sooner than later)

Your new fan

Melchick

Hmm. Well, now we got a whole Romeo and Juliet thing going on, eh? :)

Hmm. So when does Lindsey discover the guy's rich? :)

I love this and all the other chapters as well , I hope you PLEASE update soon !

The story is if everybody is getting mad at you because you haven't gotten to the plot yet,just tell 'em to shut their traps and wait a few figgin 're building up the plot line and I think it's real 't wait till the next chapterLove yer story!Stay Gold!

you just posted the same chapter again.

Do you know you just updated the same chapter?

Why did I just read Chapter 3 again as Chapter 4... LOL this is good can't wait for the next part...

this is good...hurry and update!

riding in a car with a complete stanger... sad to say i've done that... hope it turns out okay.