 oliviatocali 2008-02-04 . chapter 1Yay, I like Hartigan and Nancy! You did a great job :) |
 nonamedman 2006-07-04 . chapter 1cool.
NOTE: there is almost no diffrence between the comics and the movie. |
 babimacintosh 2006-03-27 . chapter 1hm...u need 2 lemgthen it. add more. SEQUEL! |
 Onimusha2b 2005-12-27 . chapter 1Aw. That's cute. Aw. |
 Selphie108 2005-08-30 . chapter 1That was good, but I think you should write more. If you have seen the movie its just an overview. If you havent seen the movie or know the comic it would be slightly dull. I dont mean it as a bad thing either! |
 acb 2005-05-14 . chapter 1 That was really well done. I'm sorry you don't like the characters more because I'd love to see you write more about them or even just Nancy. |
 Moonjava 2005-05-11 . chapter 1Pretty good I like it. |