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| Bloodsuckers37 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was nice. This is the first story that I have read that didn't just focus on Chalie and Don. This really was a nice change of pace. Some of your other stories also explore some of the other characters as well. That is just nice. That is something that I really enjoy about your work. Thanks for sharing! |
| Lewisa Clark 2005-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting! I love the insight into Larry's character. It rings true. |
| grace_of_night 2005-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseyaay! a Larry fanfic! This is really good. I can see that Larry's dad's name would be Jim. It just seems appropriate. Thanks for staying in character. :) |
| N'kala 2005-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOoh- interesting contrasts here! I liked it! |
| Anonymous 2005-05-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust thought you should know there's been a Numb3rs fic out there called Fathers and Sons for some time now. It'd be nice if yours was renamed so it wouldn't be confused with the original. |
| Scifi-warper 2005-05-11 ch 1, | abuseahh, sob, sniff. Poor poor Larry. I only wish he could have had a few last words with his dad, you know to make things right. I feel so bad that he has to live the rest of his life not knowing. Great story! |
| deichtine 2005-05-11 ch 1, | abuse"As he walked back he thought about his feelings. About how he wasn't more upset that his father had died. He was sorry that Jim was dead, he really was. But he wasn't sorry that Jim was gone." Very well put. Having had a rather estranged relationship with my own father before he died (no ill-will or negativity, we were just basically strangers) these last two sentences really resonated. |