unbelievably amazing! your story is soooo good. you are a great writer. you could publish something. i would read it. i the next chapter i would be helpfulif you gave some background information for all of the characters. like, explain how Georges mom came to the cesspool. and how One eye came to the court, who he was before. Georges early childhood. things like that.

so when coes he get initiated or somethin in the court of the rougue?

you've captured my attention.

PLEASE UPDATE!

Great. Please continue.

cool story, george is my favorite male character. you're doing a great job, and you're getting the way they speak perfectly.(like with the ye and like this "So, how’s th’ thievin’ goin’?”

great beginning, keep it up!

I love it! cool! this is going to my favorites!

I really like it. George is my favorite and I've laways wondered how he learned to be a thief. I like One Eye as well. He is a good, round character. I hope we get to learn more about him. Is Talek the man George defeated to become Rogue?

Yay!Another great story!I think that it was the best I've read so far!I can't wait for the next chapter!The story is really good,and the characters are full of life and detail.Keep up the awesome job!

Please Please Pleas up dtae. i love this story! i lurve George he rocks my socks. OMG did i just really say that? kill me now. anyschmoo this story? LUV. IT seriously update. please to save my sanity.

this story is so much fun! plz update!

Where are you? It's been almost 4 months. I really like his story! It was actually today that I thought someone should write a story of George's past and I stumbled upon a perfect one. PLEASE update!

sounds good...cant wait to see what happens next!

ack! so good! woot! awesome story!

Another GREAT chapter. This is one of my alltime favorite stories. I love george and stories about him. Please update soon! I wan tot know what happens next!