I really like this story! ^__^ Good job!

You did portray Mikey extraordinarly well and had me laughing my head off near constantly!

just read your fic i loved it great work

Yay, a Mikey fic!! Me latecomer. Bad. But fic good!!Kinda reviewing it all together if that's okay?

1Haha- Poor Alexander Graham Bell. Geniuses just ain’t appreciated…

Ch2 Yeah I can just see that lecture! Aww…but it’s cause they care (and son’t want to get punished by Splinter)!
All Hail King Dorkus!!
Noo-maybe horses just lead good lives or something…

Ch3Yeha, it’s amazing how many of these looks end up kinda constipated…
Haha- guess even Mikey can get fed up!
Oh I don’t know- think that buggy-eyed constipated Guy is a pretty good name. Certainly original. Handy for trying to get a hotmail account.
Ooh! The plot thickenth!

Ch5-No! Mikey! Why didn’t you tell him! Oh okay, plan good…I guess. Yay! Whacked-out wizard!
Oh I don’t know…could be the great Ninja Exam. (“Whoohoo, I got an A1 for Sleeping on Steps but failed Stealthy Assassination. Damn.”)

Ch6 (giggles) Dust bunnies, Mikey? Real smooth…
Oh no- Mikey, you just failed the exam on Stealthy Eavesdropping!
Oh, is that what happened to the previous stable boy…?

Ch7 Yes, and ain’t it handy for the good guys?
Oh…that’s what happened to the stable boy…

Ch8 Hey, I know a guy called Gareth. Whether anyone’d notice if he were turned into a green blue iguana is a different story…
Whoohoo! Charge of the Light Brigade! Battle of Rohan! COWABUNGA!!

Ch7 Wow! Go Catherine. Good practice for fighting James later I guess…
Ouchie. Poor Mike.That’s gonna hurt him later on..

Ch10- Oh that’s very Lion, The Witch And The Wardrobe…
Brillient fic! Looking forward to your next!

We!! A logical ending that doesn't semd me thinking!

Sorry it took me so long to review. Between Hurricane Katrina, life and school all fighting for my attention, I've been kinda busy. As I told you numerous times, I absolutely adored this story. Looking forward to more of your delightful works. ^_^

Cool ending. Loved it.

Aw, great ending! I sure wish that someone would believe him, still it's a story to tell the grandkids. Ha, I bet that Master Splinter would tell him not to watch so much TV! Great story, absolutely loved reading it!

I had two cans of Coke tonight, so if this is slightly unintelligible or weird that's the reason. I SWEAR it was JUST Coca-Cola!! That's it. It was in a can and everything. Me not be sleeping anytime soon.

Aw, Poor Mikey, no one believes him.

hehe, cute suggestion with the story at the end!! LOL! nice epilogue to a neat little story!

Cheers,
~pacphys~

Loved it! And awesome ending LG!

Hun the elephant man? (chuckles hysterically)

Yes, that son of a motherless goat is DEAD! YES! (gives a jubilant cry and does a tribal ritual to seal what his evil influence left)

Hey, it's almost done? Oh, drats.

Ashite Imasu
LN

Excellent! To bad for those who died, but EXCELLENT!

Awesome! Hang on- Mike's never kiled before? Anywho... Awesome story!

Great chapter - poor Mikey, faced with a decision like that, I can see him reacting like that, too. A grim chapter, but well written. And, there appears to be hope for him getting back home. I look forward to the epilogue!

heh heh. I had to read that first sentence six times. I'm not usually dyslexic like that, but I kept seeing the word house instead of horse. It just didn't make any sense. It makes much more sense now that I read what's actually written.

LOL! 'Hun the elephant man'

Help, he's a turtle and he can't get up! (That was shamelessly stolen from the third movie BTW. And I'm about to steal another one.) If he gets killed in the past does that mean that he doesn't get born in the future?

Oh! Poor Mikey!! That can't be easy on the poor guy. How's he going to deal with killing Coen? How's he going to get home?! where are you going with this!? ACK! Will someone stop me from asking all sorts of questions that will be answered in the story at some point (I assume) that don't have a snowball's chance in heck of being answered by the author?

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He'd better be going home.

Great chapter!!

Cheers,
~pacphys~